diff --git a/json-activity.xml b/json-activity.xml index f54494c..ad98e2c 100644 --- a/json-activity.xml +++ b/json-activity.xml @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ In its simplest form, an activity consists of an actor, a verb, an - an object, and a target. + object, and a target. It tells the story of a person performing an action on or with an object -- "Geraldine posted a photo to her album" or "John shared a video". In most cases these components will be @@ -293,10 +293,10 @@ Object Describes the target of the activity. The precise meaning of the activity's target is dependent on the activities verb, - but will often be the object the English preposition "to". + but will often be the object of the English preposition "to". For instance, in the activity, "John saved a movie to his wishlist", the target of the activity is "wishlist". The activity - target MUST NOT be used to identity an indirect object that is + target MUST NOT be used to identify an indirect object that is not a target of the activity. An activity MAY contain a target property whose value is a single Object.