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       <p>Vishnu here, CEO of Ente.</p>
 
-      <p>Thank you for giving Ente a shot, and apologies for not meeting your expectations.</p>
+      <p>Thank you for trying Ente, sorry to see you leave.</p>
 
-      <p>This is my personal email address. Please let me know what we could have done better, we'd be grateful for feedback!</p>
+      <p>This is my personal email address. If there's anything we could have done better, please let me know. We'd be grateful for feedback.</p>
 
       <p>Best,
         <br/>