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@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ Accountability * Authenticity * Compassion * Generosity * Integrity * Intercultu
 
 What I say and do here is confidential. I will only share my own experience and personal insights. I will not share another man’s words, actions, or identity outside this group. If I wish to mention anything specific a man shared in a previous meeting, I will ask his permission first.
 
-Confidentiality is there to create a sense of safety for all. Confidentiality does not apply in situations of abuse or neglect of children or the elderly, or threat to harm self or others. If someone’s life is in immediate danger, action may be required.
+Confidentiality is intended to create a sense of safety for all. Confidentiality does not apply in situations of abuse or neglect of children or the elderly, or threat to harm self or others. If someone’s life is in immediate danger, action may be required.
 
 ### No recording
 
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ I will refrain from violence, whether physical, verbal, emotional, or spiritual.
 
 ### No Drugs or Alcohol
 
-No drugs or alcohol. I will not attend the group while under the influence of alcohol or recreational drugs. If I break this agreement, I will tell the group and accept the group's choice in handling this to maintain a safe space for the men present.
+I will not attend the group while under the influence of alcohol or recreational drugs. If I break this agreement, I will tell the group and accept the group's choice in handling this to maintain a safe space for the men present.
 
 ### Participation
 
@@ -59,7 +59,8 @@ I will ask permission before offering feedback. Feedback reflects what I heard/s
 
 Safety is everyone's responsibility. Any man may pass at any time to stop or pause any process to maintain safety.
 
-Checking out
+### Checking out
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 I will check out before hanging up. I understand men could be concerned for my welfare, and I will respond if someone contacts me. If I fail to do so or exhibit concerning behaviour, someone from MKP Japan may contact my emergency contact or emergency services.
 
 ### Online Etiquette